Yaaru Nee
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YAARU NEE
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ninna kanDa mele
preethi moLakeyodedide
ninna mogave yedeyalli
mane maadi...
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This has come out well. To avoid repetition, possibly you could look at relacing "Nanna" with "Enna" in line no 8.
Shashi
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Yes Ranjani u are right. it is "Green Love". I have plans to publish these poems but i don't have any contacts of publishers right now. I m trying to get one.
With Regards,
Govardhana
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Govardhana,
Your poems have a wonderful 1960s, 70s feel to them. I was thinking these would make some nice movie songs , but realized that they don't make such songs anymore!
BTW, what does hasirolavane mean? Oh, wait wait, I think I know! Only Green love?
Well, I better wait for your input!
ranjini
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Please feel free to post your comments.
With Regards,
Govardhana
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