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SAVI NENAPU ------------------- ninna roopa hache haakide nanna kannalli sere hididu naa adanu poo... Expand

Govardhana K N posted 4 mnths ago

Hi Enzo,

Please check my other poems also and give me your feedback.

With Regards,

Govardhana

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waste buster posted 4 mnths ago

This is also good. But I feel that "Nanna" and "Ninna" have repeated too many times. Once you say nanna, further it is implied.

In line 7, I think it should be "Hrudayada"

Shashi

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Govardhana K N posted 4 mnths ago

dhanyavaada.

Nanna bere kavanagaLannu odi nodi

inthi nimma
Govardhana

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Enzo posted 4 mnths ago

Nimma nenapu tumbaa saviyaagide...

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Govardhana K N posted 4 mnths ago

Please leave your feedback when you go thru my poems.

With Regards,
Govardhana

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